“I Sing the Body Electric” [3 of 9] by Walt Whitman [w/ Audio]

I knew a man, a common farmer, the father 
of five sons,
And in them the fathers of sons, and in
them the fathers of sons.

This man was of wonderful vigor, calmness,
beauty of person,
The shape of his head, the pale yellow and
white of his hair and beard, the
immeasurable meaning of his black eyes,
the richness and breadth of his manners,
These I used to go and visit him to see, he
was wise also,
He was six feet tall, he was over eighty years
old, his sons were massive, clean,
bearded, tan-faced, handsome,
They and his daughters loved him, all who
saw him loved him,
They did not love him by allowance, they
loved him with personal love,
He drank water only, the blood show'd like
scarlet through the clear-brown skin of
his face,
He was a frequent gunner and fisher, he
sail'd his boat himself, he had a fine one
presented to him by a ship-joiner, he had
fowling-pieces presented to him by men
that loved him,
When he went with his five sons and many
grand-sons to hunt or fish, you would
pick him out as the most beautiful and
vigorous of the gang,
You would wish long and long to be with
him, you would wish to sit by him in the
boat that you and he might touch each
other.

“I Sing the Body Electric” [2 of 9] by Walt Whitman [w/ Audio]

The love of the body of man or woman
balks account, the body itself balks,
account,
That of the male is perfect, and that of
the female is perfect.

The expression of the face balks account,
But the expression of a well-made man
appears not only in his face,
It is in his limbs and joints also, it is
curiously in the joints of his hips and
wrists,
It is in his walk, the carriage of his neck, the
flex of his waist and knees, dress does not
hide him,
The strong sweet quality he has strikes
through the cotton and broadcloth,
To see him pass conveys as much as the best
poem, perhaps more,
You linger to see his back, and the back of
his neck and shoulder-side.

The sprawl and fulness of babes, the bosoms
and heads of women, the folds of their
dress, their style as we pass in the street,
the contour of their shape downwards,
The swimmer naked in the swimming-bath,
seen as he swims through the transparent
green-shine, or lies with his face up and
rolls silently to and fro in the heave of the
water,
The bending forward and backward of
rowers in row-boats, the horseman in his
saddle,
Girls, mothers, house-keepers, in all their
performances,
The group of laborers seated at noon-time
with their open dinner-kettles, and their
wives waiting,
The female soothing a child, the farmer's
daughter in the garden or cow-yard,
The young fellow hoeing corn, the sleigh-
driver driving his six horses through the
crowd,
The wrestle of wrestlers, two apprentice-
boys, quite grown, lusty, good-natured,
native-born, out on the vacant lot at sun-
down after work,
The coats and caps thrown down, the
embrace of love and resistance,
The upper-hold and the under-hold, the hair
rumpled over and blinding their eyes;
The march of firemen in their own
costumes, the play of masculine muscle
through clean-setting trowsers and waist-
straps,
The slow return from the fire, the pause
when the bell strikes suddenly again, and
the listening on the alert,
The natural, perfect, varied attitudes, the
bent head, the curv'd neck and the
counting;
Such-like I love -- I loosen myself, pass
freely, am at the mother's breast with the
little child,
Swim with the swimmers, wrestle with
wrestlers, march in line with the firemen,
and pause, listen, count.

“I Sing the Body Electric” [1 of 9] by Walt Whitman [w/ Audio]

I sing the body electric,
The armies of those I love engirth me
and I engirth them,
They will not let me off till I go with them,
respond to them,
And discorrupt them, and charge them full
with the charge of the soul.

Was it doubted that those who corrupt
their own bodies conceal themselves?
And if those who defile the living are as bad
as they who defile the dead?
And if the body does not do fully
as much as the soul?
And if the body were not the soul,
what is the soul?

“Gliding O’er All” by Walt Whitman [w/ Audio]

Gliding o'er all, through all,
Through Nature, Time, and Space,
As a ship on the waters advancing,
The voyage of the soul -- not life alone,
Death, many deaths I'll sing.

Five Wise Lines from Leaves of Grass

Why, who makes much of a miracle? As to me I know of nothing else but miracles.

Walt Whitman, “miracles”

The American contempt for statues and ceremonies, the boundless impatience for restraint…

Walt whitman, “Song of the Broad-axe”

I exist as I am, that is enough. If no other in the world would be aware I sit content. And if each and all be aware I sit content.

walt whitman, “Song of myself”

I am not the poet of goodness only, I do not decline to be the poet of wickedness also.

walt whitman, “song of myself”

If any thing is sacred the human body is sacred.

Walt whitman, “i sing the body electric”

NOTES: Numerous editions exist between the 1855 and 1892 (deathbed) edition. It’s available for free on Project Gutenberg at: https://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/1322

In Homage to Leaves of Grass

You're my Analects,
           my Gita,
           my Dao De Jing,
           my sutras,
           my Meditations,
           and my Republic
 all rolled into one.

You are the scripture by which I live.

You present a path to that rare place:
            extreme confidence
            which tears no one down,

            but, rather, lifts all.

You achieve this by crushing 
            the ordinary.

Nothing is common.

Everything is a miracle. 
            (Even those leaves of grass
                      you repeatedly reference.)

No one is so rough
             or promiscuous
             or simple
as to be lowly.

Your author's unbridled enthusiasm 
             glowed with the insane confidence
             of an adolescent boy,
but his awesomeness was never gained
             by subtracting from others.
Rather by seeing the bright, beautiful spark 
             in each body,
             mind,
             pair of hands,
             & burdened shoulder. 

You are America,
             the America we want to be.

The America that labors,
             but which takes time to see
             its natural wonders. 

The America that heard what Jesus said,
             and became less excelled at stone-throwing,
             and more at cheek-turning.

The America that could see beyond dogma
             and hard-edged tribalism,
             and could learn from all the 
             grand & glorious people 
             who reached its shores --

So that we could be the best version of ourselves
            through the strengths of all of us,
            and not be stymied by missing 
            the great beauty & knowledge
           among us. 

You pair away the extraneous burdens
            which tax the mind,
and show us what the world looks like
             unfiltered. 

You teach one to see a beauty
            that is so well hidden 
            that its own possessor doesn't 
                      recognize it.

You are the song of a life well lived.

BOOK REVIEW: Leaves of Grass by Walt Whitman

Leaves of GrassLeaves of Grass by Walt Whitman

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

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There are a number of editions of this collection of poems, as Whitman apparently continued to revise it right up until his death. The 1855 edition is popular but there is a “Deathbed Edition” which–as the name implies–is the closest thing to a final draft that exists.

Back in the day (the late 19th century), this was considered racy and controversial stuff, and the collection got Whitman fired from is civil service job as well as a great many vitriol-filled reviews. Like the works of Emerson and Thoreau, with whom Whitman shared some beliefs, it was also controversial in that the poem put man at the fore and religion was shunted out of the picture. (Trust in yourself and don’t blindly follow anyone was still a heretical notion among many at the time.) This isn’t to say that Whitman eliminated spirituality from his work (any more than Emerson did), references to the soul are commonplace—but it’s a mystic spirituality. There were features outside the “prurient” and religious that angered many, such as Whitman’s shining of light on the barbaric institution of slavery. However, today Leaves of Grass is considered one of America’s greatest and most beloved works of poetry, and for good reason. It beautifully reflects an America that was changing, an America subject to a new era of ideas both from science and from distant lands.

It should be noted that this is a life’s work. If you are expecting a typically thin poetry collection, you will be in for a surprise. Leaves of Grass is of a page count normally reserved for histories and epic novels. The collection consists of 35 “Books” that are quasi-themed sub-collections of poems. Individual poems vary greatly with some being only a few lines and some running for pages. Most of the poems are free verse, though there are sections that display a meter (specifically iambic pentameter.) Free verse is poetry without meter or rhyme. If you didn’t know there was such poetry, you may want to work through your Doctor Seuss before you crack open a tome like this one.

There are a few themes that are repeatedly revisited. One idea that made the collection so controversial is that it exalted in the human form and the physicality of humanity. In recent years, a lot of discussion of this work revolves around whether Whitman was or wasn’t homosexual or bisexual. Not that it matters, but the fact is there is a dearth of information about what form of sexuality Whitman practiced—if any, but one can imagine why people wondered. Whitman writes descriptively about both the male and female forms, and was not shy about verse that suggested lying with this gender in one poem and the other in the next. The poem “I Sing the Body Electric” is probably the most famous example of Whitman’s discussion of the body.

However, perhaps the most striking theme is a celebration of America, both in its natural state and as it was shaped by the people who settled there. In multiple poems one sees long strings of description and exposition about the various states of the United States. Whitman paints pictures of the nation as a collage showing the variations among its constituent parts. To a lesser extent, he does the same for the world (e.g. see Book VI.)

I enjoyed this collection, although I will admit I read it a bit here and a bit there over a long time period. I, therefore, probably missed some of the depth of meaning coming from how the poems were arranged. Maybe someday I’ll have time to go back and read it once more. However, the beauty of this collection is that it’s so many different things. It meanders like a river, and peers overland with an eagle-eyed view. It offers scenes that are like a hard-boiled work of film noir and ones that are like Ansel Adams pictures. It’s not anti-god, but rather about the god within, or the god within the blade of grass. Leaves of Grass offers brilliant turns of phrase, bold descriptions, and always interspersed with the author’s personal philosophy.

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