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Vortex Drop [Tanka]

Posted on July 11, 2024 by B Gourley

drifting toward falls,
 a leaf twists & pivots
  -- as if frantically --
 as if to avoid the fall,
 then slips over & glides.

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Jorge Medico on July 12, 2024 at 4:23 am said:

Nice imagery…

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- B Gourley on July 12, 2024 at 6:47 am said:
  
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