two little kittens
crawl the undercarriage
of a dump-truck.
Taillight Kitty [Haiku]
Tiger Riding for Beginners
Traveling Poet Philosopher & Occasional Wiseacre
two little kittens
crawl the undercarriage
of a dump-truck.
Tiger Riding for Beginners 
Your cat poem is like “Mountain and Water” / “Fields and Gardens” Poetry. In Chinese: 山水田园诗
Example: Wang Wei’s “Deer Park” (《鹿柴》)
空山不见人， But no one is seen on the empty mountain,
但闻人语响。 Yet the echo of human voices is heard.
返景入深林， The sun’s reflection enters the deep woods,
复照青苔上。 And shines again upon the green moss.
This poem is a perfect example of “describing what they see.” It’s a quiet, visual moment, yet it evokes a profound sense of peace and depth.
Thanks for sharing your cat poem!
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