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Dizzying [Haiku]

Posted on June 5, 2025 by B Gourley

mountain trail:
 kicked stone sails, then drops...
  out of sight.

2 thoughts on “Dizzying [Haiku]”

Janice K Jones on June 9, 2025 at 9:40 am said:

I like this – the sense of ‘falling’ is about much more than a stone – that image opens up many ideas and you leave the reader to fill in the huge absence! Nice Haiku.

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- B Gourley on June 9, 2025 at 11:25 am said:
  
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