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Watercourse Weave [Haiku]

Posted on November 29, 2023 by B Gourley

the river weaves --
  just a gentle meander;
   a floating leaf roams.

4 thoughts on “Watercourse Weave [Haiku]”

Mary K. Doyle on November 29, 2023 at 10:12 pm said:

Great imagery.

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- B Gourley on November 30, 2023 at 9:00 am said:
  
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jane tims on November 29, 2023 at 11:01 pm said:

‘roams’ is such a good word, implies carefree, yet purposeful.

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- B Gourley on November 30, 2023 at 9:00 am said:
  
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