I
thundering falls
sing a mind into trance —
timeless sound
II
nearing the falls,
the grand spectacle becomes
a fog wall
III
yamabushi
sit under the cascade —
nails unhammered
IV
seeking earth’s center,
the river drops as far as
land allows
V
a round boulder
sits at the precipice,
refusing to roll

Fantastic images: “fog wall”; “unhammered nails” , etc.
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thanks
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Reading this piece I could hear and see the waterfall in my mind. Great way to express the sensation visiting a waterfall can create in the soul.
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Excellent. Thanks.
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I love waterfalls & you depicted it so well
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