from a speeding train,
i see a fresh-plowed field
in which nothing moves.
Train Scene [Haiku]
the !n(tro)verted yogi
Bernie Gourley. Traveling Poet-Philosopher
from a speeding train,
i see a fresh-plowed field
in which nothing moves.
the !n(tro)verted yogi 
This such a great pairing of image and short poem. I like the choice of punctuation indicating the immediacy as would be felt in the context of the poem. The pairing of the image with the poem is an excellent choice, as well, it is a very simple image with a stark subject paired with a short poem, with both speaking to and with each other, this gives the work as a whole a way of saying things unsaid, and makes it multi-dimensional, which is genius.
I really appreciated the reflective meditative nature of this post, it helped me. Thank you, hope you have a good day.
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Thanks
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No problem, anytime.
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