Rushing water carves rock and clay away,
gouging out a statement in nature’s hand.
Water spatter creates a misty spray,
stinging sharply as pelted with wet sand.
A foamy ridge takes a serpentine form
on the glassy warp field glazing brook stones.
This wild water isn’t born of savage storm;
it’s the effortless effort of Zen koans.
My camera fails to capture the calm scene,
but blurs it into a tiny tempest,
transforming a mundane forest stream
into a world scarring menace.
In these rapids I see a tsunami
washing over isles of Izanami.
Hi I loved your poem, I hope to be able to write as good as this in the future! I’ve just started my blog and have a few poems on there too. I would love for you to check them out and follow back if you like 😀 Thanks!
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Thank you very much. You’re too kind.
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You’re welcome 😀
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