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Spawning Clouds [Haiku]

Posted on August 15, 2022 by B Gourley

clouds rise like smoke 
from turbulent cascades --
ghosts ascending

4 thoughts on “Spawning Clouds [Haiku]”

Jeff Flesch on August 16, 2022 at 6:40 am said:

Lovely write.

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- B Gourley on August 16, 2022 at 9:04 am said:
  
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Catherin J Pascal Dunk on February 19, 2026 at 5:55 pm said:

how about an inversion: smoke-like?
I love the ghost metaphor and how the word ascending falls, containing so many of the same letters as cascades!

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- B Gourley on February 19, 2026 at 6:18 pm said:
  
  I like it. Thanks.
  
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