outside? muggy;
from inside: gray skies look
like Viennese winter
cool mornings,
after a rainy night,
soothe the spirit
the guard shack,
topped by a wading pool
only I can see
rain song
absorbs harsh sounds,
hushing the city
trust old people
with umbrellas more than
the blue in the sky
Nice. Several haiku joined together?
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Just with a common theme.
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#Haiku Happenings #8: Bernie Gourley’s haiku #sequence “Monsoon Haiku” courtesy of Ben Cross!
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HaiKu was a type of poetry I learned of in the 6th grade. As there are many ways to express poetry, one can consider them self to be fortunate to see it in motion. Poetry is not just an art to be heard.
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That’s a nice loosely strung set of words
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Cool haiku
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Cool
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wonderful!!
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Welcome 🙂
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Lovely haiku! Can relate to every one of them. Beautifully captured!
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nice amazing…
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your always welcome
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A very nice post,
which fills my head with ideas,
I’d like to ponder.
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very nice photo
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This is great
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“Trust old people
with umbrellas more than
the blue in the skies” beautiful
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Agreed. This was the best one.
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Love it!
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💖💖
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Loved it. Mainly these lines :
trust old people
with umbrellas more than
the blue in the sky
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Thank you
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Wow
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🙂
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thanks alot
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the last three lines: all you need
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Nice thanks
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👍Nice haiku
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serial haiku
your are a killer :p
you nail it
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Beautiful words 🙂
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Very nice
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Nice.
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