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Sweeper [Senryū]

Posted on July 19, 2021 by B Gourley

a neat pile swept,
reaching for the dustpan...
stymied by a gust

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henhouselady on July 19, 2021 at 5:32 pm said:

A gust o wind and a dustpan are bad news. I take it this is symbolic.

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